Extinguish

As my demons ignited a fire,

Its flames increased by every

Passing day, neither angels

Nor god, could extinguish

The fire away

Reviews

[Najam Us Saher]

True feelings were very well expressed. I really liked the honest tone of this poem.

[iamshadowine]

thank you! =)

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome.

[An owl on the moon]

How your soul burns in a wildness that will not die. From the depths of you rise these words, speaking to the sky, discovering the fierce fight of your being. Powerful.

[iamshadowine]

thank you! :D

[Jackie]

Sounds real intense. Got a real suspenseful start. Sound as though its missing peices though. Other than that i really enjoyed this 9.5

[iamshadowine]

thank you! :D

[Jes' Pi]

The poem is very nice. Why don't you continue it?

I like it.
100/100

[iamshadowine]

sure will! :) thank you for reading it :D

[Ruth]

Potently poignant, some energies and cycles are hard to "extinguish" indeed...this is visceral and tangible...

[iamshadowine]

thank you! :D