Broken Me

It was all good

until you decided to come back 

and break me again

Reviews

[thaleeyaLuna]

Oh but dear, once something is broken, it cannot be mended as whole as it once was again.
Still, that was always the cycle - to love, to hope, and to be broken.
Thank you for sharing a meaningful poem.

[iamshadowine]

thank you!!

[Sandipta$]

Try to be hpy..... They Dnt get back their lv... Who r real..... Only fake people can enjoy d so called lv

[iamshadowine]

thank you for your review

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

So very sad to be broken "again". Powerful and vulnerable write. Hard to close the heart, once opened.... time heals all they say...

[iamshadowine]

thank you!

[Coyote Poetry]

Repeat pain. Very foolish. Most of us need to learn again. Honest and true thoughts in the words. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[iamshadowine]

thank you ^_^

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[SJ Mullins]

So sad. I have been put through that too, more than once. It is never easy, but we do get through it. Nicely penned.

[iamshadowine]

thank you :)

[SJ Mullins]

You're welcome!

[Ruth]

Not easy to mend the broken pieces but to have to piece them together twice does weaken us somewhat...

[iamshadowine]

true :) thanks for reading

[William Gardner]

That's how it goes. Keep going.

[iamshadowine]

thanks ^_^

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

Owwww. Twice burned. A short yet powerful piece of writing.

[iamshadowine]

thanks :))

[Meshalini]

So short but meaningful and emotional. Nicely done

[iamshadowine]

Thank you very much :)

[andrew mitchell]

haha it was the recoil. A witty write.:)

[iamshadowine]

thank you! :)