Comfortable Lies

You comforted me with your lies,

You took me in your arms like nobody did,

But soon I realised,

It was only to rip me apart

Reviews

[Donna]

Short and to the point! Nice job!

[iamshadowine]

thank you! :)

[Ashwin Shanker]

Feeling sad for you bro .....

[Sandipta$]

All are for short tyms... Dnt run behind them

[iamshadowine]

i totally agree :)

[Jackie]

Short. Yet to the point. A great piece. Short and sweet.

[iamshadowine]

thank you!

[Coyote Poetry]

Honest and direct words. I did like them. Love and greed. Bad place to know. Thank you dear friend for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[iamshadowine]

thank you for your review

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

I hope a lesson was learned. Love can be the most wonderful thing. It can also be the most hurtful.

[iamshadowine]

true indeed! thank you

[Cassie]

Most people fall into that trap, at that time it feels good but at the end its bad, its better to tell the truth from the word go

[iamshadowine]

thanks ^_^

[andrew mitchell]

Not all blankets are warm!

[iamshadowine]

yes! thank you! :)

[CAPOLAVORO]

I can't relate to this one lol. But nice words used. Other people could surely relate specially with a broken heart. ;)

[iamshadowine]

thank you for reading and reviewing

[Rebecca Leigh]

This poem encompasses my current stage in life right now! well done

[iamshadowine]

Thank you! :D