Twilight

As I step under the sun,

I find hope.

As I step under the moon,

I find thoughts.

And somewhere between,

The sun setting and

Moon rising,

I find myself

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Perfect use of words and thoughts. You made the reader believe and see your words and thoughts. Thank you Shuchita for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

Short, inspiring and evocative. Nice little poem.

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Beautifully inspiring.
Your work evoked a sense of hope and freedom!
Great work.

[iamshadowine]

thank you! :D

[Tracey~]

This is amazing. I love every word and thought. xo

[iamshadowine]

thank you! :D

[Elizabeth]

great read. simple, sweet and insightful. loved it!

[iamshadowine]

thank you!

[Elizabeth]

You're welcome

[APOORVA]

wow!
such a simple and deep thought.
you're lucky to have yourself found. i still am searching myself all around.
beautiful write

[iamshadowine]

thank you :D

[Meshalini]

Beautiful and very meaningful.

I love it, great job.

[iamshadowine]

thanks ^_^

[Unknown Poet]

I just love this. :)
Amazingly structured..
Fantabulous flow of words...
I can relate myself in this ...
Keep writing

[iamshadowine]

thank you! :)

[Unknown Poet]

My pleasure​ friend

[Emily]

Beautiful. Such great length and brevity. Keep up the great work and fabulous imagery.

[iamshadowine]

thank you! :)

[Ashwin Shanker]

Beauty. Really loved reading this one. Short but simple but complex

[iamshadowine]

thanks ^_^