My Heart Used To Be Broken

MY HEART USED TO BE BROKEN,

BUT TIME HEALED THE WOUNDS.

THOSE BROKEN PIECES, BUILT ME UP

BUILT ME UP SO STRONG ENOUGH,

THAT I COULD RISE AND SHINE AGAIN.

BUT AS THEY SAY,

HISTORY REPEATS ITSELF,

MY HEART WAS MELTED,

THEN FROZEN,

FROZEN IN SUCH A SHAPE,

THAT WHEN IT BROKE AGAIN,

TIME COULD ONLY APOLOGIZE,

BUT COULDN’T HELP INSTEAD 

Reviews

[Sandipta$]

Time could only apologize..... Nice line... Well said

[Jackie]

lovely read. thanks for sharing

[mou]

last two line are just spell bound..all wounds get improved but the first necessity is to murder the simple heart..beautiful

[iamshadowine]

thank you! :D

[Emily]

I think this poem is good and has great potential....but maybe edit it some, see what wording fits best, just a suggestion :) Keep up the writing :)

[iamshadowine]

thank you! :)

[Lexi Villanueva]

I think its a good poem and work more on it.

[iamshadowine]

thank you! :D

[Joshua Haines]

No matter how much you are healed. Scares always remain. You have great talent with your poems. Good job

[iamshadowine]

thank you! ^_^

[Michelle Rachel]

Time isn't always the one to depend on to heal wounds. Sometimes, it takes something deeper, greater, stronger than something that fades away into nothingness.....just food for thought.

[iamshadowine]

thank you ^_^

[BlakHeart]

time always heal wounds yet scares remain and it can never be concealed. lovely work :)

[iamshadowine]

thank you :D

[barleygirl]

The best thing about your broken heart message is that, in the end, it takes us in an unexpected direction. After the first half, I was feeling this might go one way, but then it surprises -- I love it when a writer does not take the typical path, especially with love poems. Good job using imagery of brokenness, melting, & freezing, etc.

[iamshadowine]

thank you! :D

[Ruth]

Sometimes I think time is the only thing that helps and yet it is twisted in itself, time can unheal also...strange comparison...

[iamshadowine]

Thanks ^_^