Night Life

I am alive at night,

when it is a dark paradise.

I am only conscious then,

the time when I pick up my pen.

I only survive,

when I give my words life.

I only breathe,

when the light subsides. 

Reviews

[Elizabeth]

"I am only conscious then,
the time when I pick up my pen."
you have captured the emotion of every writer perfectly

[iamshadowine]

thank you :D

[Rebecca Leigh]

This is exactly what it is to be a writer, you conveyed the passion of words perfectly, well done

[iamshadowine]

Thank you!!

[Emily]

Yes, the night is a time to come alive and perhaps even more so with writing. Writing---such a great creative outlet. I love the meaning to this piece!

[iamshadowine]

Thank you ^_^

[andrew mitchell]

The night's do come alive at night, but even night's need light!! Nice one!

[iamshadowine]

thank you! :)

[Bethsinitaly]

Nice sentiment I am a total night person too keep up the good work!

[iamshadowine]

thank you!

[anne]

I only survive,
when I give my words life
Beautiful. :)
Though there are other reasons to survive as well. Isn't? Haha

[iamshadowine]

thank you! :)

[Michelle Rachel]

Is this true?? I don't doubt it is, I do the same thing a lot of the time. Silence and darkness and even darker thoughts are all a writer needs at times, doesn't mean you have to consume yourself with it.

[iamshadowine]

thank you! :)

[Rebekah Smith]

This is blunt & relatable. I like it

[iamshadowine]

thank you! :)

[Tazeen Ahmed]

in-depth portrayal of a beautiful night when a poet breathes to pen down emotions.
kudos!:)

[iamshadowine]

Thank you very much :)

[Jackie]

incredibly powerful and speaks volumes.

[iamshadowine]

thanks ^_^