Hypnosis

As I sat on the cruise,

The music played on,

But the waves interfered

And

Sang to me hypnotically

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I would liked the sea sounds more than than the music. You create honest and perfect place. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[iamshadowine]

thank you! :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Ashwin Shanker]

Try writing a longer poem. There is a lot of potential for this topic

[Jackie]

The water. The sea can have that effect on us. Its a feeling of tranquility for me. Peace and serenity...:-)

[iamshadowine]

thank you! :)

[Joshua Haines]

Happens to Me all the time. But it the sound of rain what replace my sound of music XD

[iamshadowine]

Thank you for reading

[Tony Jordan]

I love being interfered with...by waves and music. This one made me feel like this. Awesome job.

[Tony Jordan]

I love being interfered with...by waves and music. This one made me feel like this. Awesome job.

[iamshadowine]

Thank you!!

[Tony Jordan]

Welcome !!!

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Waves makes music soft to the ears,
A dreamer can get the beats.
I used to go to beaches, listening to the melody
And collecting sea shells was my job;)
Applauds

[iamshadowine]

Thank you :)

[R J Askew]

The waves were lines of verse! Quick, write them down! drown, down drown... The waves demand you hear their whispers!

[iamshadowine]

Hahaha thank you

[Ardra]

The music of waves are wonderful.... soothing to the soul...

[iamshadowine]

Thank you ^_^

[Aries1984]

And your heart was sailing to the song. Sounds very relaxing, reads very relaxing.

[iamshadowine]

thank you! :D