Past

I saw my past,

Through a window pane,

It stared back at me,

Leaving me in vain

Reviews

[Sandipta$]

Try to live in present with a grt future planning

[Ashwin Shanker]

Try to write longer poetry please. If it is short, try to make it as impactful as possible.

[Jackie]

I like that. Window pane. It makes it really quite clever:-) thanks for sharing:-)

[iamshadowine]

thank you! :)

[BlakHeart]

Amazing poem, got me there hahaha keep it up

[iamshadowine]

thanks ^_^

[andrew mitchell]

reflections of past memories well described here in spot on brevity

[iamshadowine]

thank you! :)

[Coyote Poetry]

The past can make us feel small. I agree. Logical and wise words shared in the poetry. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[iamshadowine]

Thanks ^_^

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Grey Evanescent]

Sometimes, when we recall our past, it leaves us devastated with our failures and the "i should have"'s. But in the end, the past is past and we should use it as a compass to guide us to our future.

It's a beautiful peace. Keep up!

[iamshadowine]

Thanks ^_^

[Emily]

Nice poem, brevity makes it feel more powerful. Good work!

[iamshadowine]

Thank you =)

[Joshua Haines]

Love the meaning to this poem. You have talent

[iamshadowine]

Thanks ^_^

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Past gives an opputunity to live the present and improve the future!
Kudos!

[iamshadowine]

thank you! :D