Past
A Poem by
iamshadowine
I saw my past,
Through a window pane,
It stared back at me,
Leaving me in vain
© 2017 iamshadowine
Reviews
Try to live in present with a grt future planning
Posted 7 Years Ago
Try to write longer poetry please. If it is short, try to make it as impactful as possible.
Posted 7 Years Ago
Try to write longer poetry please. If it is short, try to make it as impactful as possible.
I like that. Window pane. It makes it really quite clever:-) thanks for sharing:-)
Posted 7 Years Ago
I like that. Window pane. It makes it really quite clever:-) thanks for sharing:-)
7 Years Ago
thank you! :)
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Amazing poem, got me there hahaha keep it up
Posted 7 Years Ago
Amazing poem, got me there hahaha keep it up
reflections of past memories well described here in spot on brevity
Posted 7 Years Ago
reflections of past memories well described here in spot on brevity
7 Years Ago
thank you! :)
The past can make us feel small. I agree. Logical and wise words shared in the poetry. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote
Posted 7 Years Ago
The past can make us feel small. I agree. Logical and wise words shared in the poetry. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote
7 Years Ago
You are welcome.
Sometimes, when we recall our past, it leaves us devastated with our failures and the "i should have"'s. But in the end, the past is past and we should use it as a compass to guide us to our future.
It's a beautiful peace. Keep up!
Posted 7 Years Ago
Sometimes, when we recall our past, it leaves us devastated with our failures and the "i should have"'s. But in the end, the past is past and we should use it as a compass to guide us to our future.
It's a beautiful peace. Keep up!
Nice poem, brevity makes it feel more powerful. Good work!
Posted 7 Years Ago
Nice poem, brevity makes it feel more powerful. Good work!
Love the meaning to this poem. You have talent
Posted 7 Years Ago
Love the meaning to this poem. You have talent
Past gives an opputunity to live the present and improve the future!
Kudos!
Posted 7 Years Ago
Past gives an opputunity to live the present and improve the future!
Kudos!
7 Years Ago
thank you! :D
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