Past

Past

A Poem by iamshadowine

I saw my past,

Through a window pane,

It stared back at me,

Leaving me in vain

© 2017 iamshadowine


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Try to live in present with a grt future planning

Posted 7 Years Ago


Try to write longer poetry please. If it is short, try to make it as impactful as possible.

Posted 7 Years Ago


I like that. Window pane. It makes it really quite clever:-) thanks for sharing:-)

Posted 7 Years Ago


iamshadowine

7 Years Ago

thank you! :)
Amazing poem, got me there hahaha keep it up

Posted 7 Years Ago


iamshadowine

7 Years Ago

thanks ^_^
reflections of past memories well described here in spot on brevity

Posted 7 Years Ago


iamshadowine

7 Years Ago

thank you! :)
The past can make us feel small. I agree. Logical and wise words shared in the poetry. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


iamshadowine

7 Years Ago

Thanks ^_^
Coyote Poetry

7 Years Ago

You are welcome.
Sometimes, when we recall our past, it leaves us devastated with our failures and the "i should have"'s. But in the end, the past is past and we should use it as a compass to guide us to our future.

It's a beautiful peace. Keep up!

Posted 7 Years Ago


iamshadowine

7 Years Ago

Thanks ^_^
Nice poem, brevity makes it feel more powerful. Good work!

Posted 7 Years Ago


iamshadowine

7 Years Ago

Thank you =)
Love the meaning to this poem. You have talent

Posted 7 Years Ago


iamshadowine

7 Years Ago

Thanks ^_^
Past gives an opputunity to live the present and improve the future!
Kudos!

Posted 7 Years Ago


iamshadowine

7 Years Ago

thank you! :D

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Added on February 2, 2017
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