Veil

I keep my sobs and tears hushed,

Because there is nobody whom I trust.

Reviews

[Emily]

Very deep.
Keep on writing!

[Dust That Drifts Throug..]

An emotional poem in two lines.

[iamshadowine]

Thank you ^_^

[Junebug]

a nice line, I'd love for you to continue it!

[iamshadowine]

Surely, thank you

[Ashwin Shanker]

Let the joy multiply, keep stressful times few.
Just letting you know, that we are all there for you.

[iamshadowine]

Thank you =)

[Meshalini]

It's amazing...

very emotional in just 2 lines...

Well done..

[iamshadowine]

Thank you :D

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Whoa! These words express great emotions, it's quite honest and intense..

[iamshadowine]

Thank you! :D

[Farhan Shaikh]

A strong lines...well written

[iamshadowine]

Thank you :)

[willbradley]

nicely written. The second line feels slightly disconnected and out of meter, but if you want it to feel more free verse, its good. You really said alot in a minimal amount of words. Well done.

[Coyote Poetry]

I understand this poem. Hard to show real self. Few people we can trust with our real face. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[iamshadowine]

Thank you ^_^

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Giulia King]

I can really relate to this poem.. Very powerful.

[iamshadowine]

Thank you :D