Veil

I keep my sobs and tears hushed,

Because there is nobody whom I trust.

Reviews

[R J Askew]

Hmm, it is good that you do not trust - from the misanthropic side of things. But why do you still need to sob? Arguably the more stoical we become the less we need to feel the causes of pain. But is a life without sobs and tears a good thing? Not to have them perhaps means no feelings. But what if feelings are at the root of our discontent?

[Najam Us Saher]

Very well written. I liked it.

[iamshadowine]

Thank you!

[Rebecca Leigh]

short but to the point. this piece can relate to many, well done!

[iamshadowine]

Thank you ^_^

[MightyMouse]

It's short, sweet, and to the point. I'm sure many people feel this way.

[iamshadowine]

Thank you!!

[Jackie]

that was a great title to express the feeling. so little can in many cases express so much

[iamshadowine]

Thank you!!

[Grey Evanescent]

Beautiful. I never knew such short sentences would hold a much bigger meaning. Love your works.
Keep up the good work :)

[iamshadowine]

Thank you ^_^

[Aprille]

Who to trust? I don't know anymore. Few words but full of honesty, pain, and bits of strength.

[iamshadowine]

Thank you =)

[Aprille]

you're welcome.

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

Short and sincere. Painful and beautiful.

[iamshadowine]

Thank you ^_^

[fallen.angel.]

So much pain in so few words

Great work!

[iamshadowine]

Thank you :)

[andrew mitchell]

Lovely brevity, yes it's cruel if one is mocked when in sadness. A concise write!

[iamshadowine]

Thank you ^_^