Stars

Under the starry night,

we sat,

with blankets on,

to shield us from the cold wind.

Counting the stars,

Intertwining our hands,

Looking at each other

or perhaps,

Just giving a sweet glance.

Reviews

[Dr. YumnaKay]

"Looking at each other
or perhaps,
Just giving a sweet glance."
This is such a sweet composition! Sometimes, conversations aren't necessary.. Just a look bestowed upon our loved ones says it all... Loved reading this..☺

[iamshadowine]

thank you so much :D

[Dr. YumnaKay]

You are welcome ☺

[Anindita Janhabee]

This is so magical... so sweet too...
short yet beautiful..
simple yet stunning!!!
loved it...
Anindita

[iamshadowine]

thank you :D

[Coyote Poetry]

Kind, sweet and beautiful words for love. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[iamshadowine]

thank you so much Coyote :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.

[Meshalini]

Amazing, short but lovely poem..

Well done..

[iamshadowine]

thank you :D

[Addict With a Pen]

I like how it leaves room for imagination. They can be any two people in the world. Young or old. It's nice to remember sometimes 'butterflies inside' love never fades away. Great write.

[iamshadowine]

Thank you ^_^

[Kim]

Few words that paints a pretty clear image, I found it to be rather cute actually :) Good work!

[iamshadowine]

Thank you very much ^_^

[Emily]

Lovely poem!
Keep it up!!

[iamshadowine]

Thank you!

[Dust That Drifts Throug..]

A short and sweet poem about to people in love.

[iamshadowine]

Thank you :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

sweet glances are good...intriguing and mysterious...

and intertwining hands keeps us sheltered from the cold...

nicely done...

j.

[iamshadowine]

Thank you :D

[Giulia King]

I always say this; I love when writers write about stars. There's something magical about it :) Good job on this piece

[iamshadowine]

Thank you ^_^