Stars

Under the starry night,

we sat,

with blankets on,

to shield us from the cold wind.

Counting the stars,

Intertwining our hands,

Looking at each other

or perhaps,

Just giving a sweet glance.

Reviews

[Rebecca Leigh]

Sweetly romantic. This is the description of a perfect night

[iamshadowine]

Thank you!!

[iamshadowine]

Thank you!!

[MightyMouse]

Aww, that's sweet. :D Wish I had that.

[iamshadowine]

:D Thank you for your review

[Jackie]

a beautiful read and lovely sentiment to the events. Thanks for posting

[iamshadowine]

Thank you for reading ^_^

[Aprille]

I love the imagery. The kind of night I like (though it's only me, not "we"). Simple and sweet.

[iamshadowine]

Thank you ^_^

[Aprille]

you're welcome. :)

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

Ain't love wonderful. A nice picture painted in words.

[iamshadowine]

Thank you :)

[fallen.angel.]

Very sweet and your words invoke such vivid imagery

I thoroughly enjoyed this :]

[iamshadowine]

Thank you very much :)

[Ashwin Shanker]

Beautiful imagery. It is short, crisp and well worded.
sitting in silence with our beloved under the stars is truly an experience suited for dreams.
Lovely write!

[Michelle Rachel]

Awwwwww!!!!!!!!! I LOVE ITTTTTTT!!!!!!! Knew I'd get thru to you....

[Junebug]

seems like you have sweet thoughts, write more!