Smoke

HE SMOKED,

AS HE PUFFED THE CIGARETTE,

HER HAPPINESS TURNED TO FUME.

 

Reviews

[SZHZIA]

I can understand your emotions that you have worded in this poem. I love it.

Best
Szhzia

[iamshadowine]

Thank you so much :D

[SZHZIA]

You are welcome. :-)

[Emily]

Loved this!!
Keep on writing!

[iamshadowine]

Thank you ^_^

[Ruth]

You leave a lot to the imagination and left me pondering...

[iamshadowine]

Thank you :D

[Dust That Drifts Throug..]

A descriptive poem compozed in a few stanzas.

[iamshadowine]

Thank you ^_^

[Raylene]

Shadowine I need you to review my stuff before I review yours

[iamshadowine]

Thank you :)

[Jackie]

A fascinating read. Very descriptive in such few stamzas

[iamshadowine]

Thank you ^_^

[Giulia King]

Powerful piece! I really like it! And it kinda makes me wanna light one haha. Good job.

[iamshadowine]

thank you :D