Love Triangle

It all started the day we talked.

I had never met such a genuine boy,

Such a gentleman,

Such a good friend

It was one of the best things that happened to me,

But good things have to come to an end.

 

We talked for hours,

He became my favorite,

I started liking him,

But for me, things never go straight.

 

I knew his favorite songs,

He told me about his dreams,

Nobody knew him better than me.

 

It all came to a near end,

When a girl,

A girl who was my friend,

Came between us

 

Our conversations subdued,

We only talked about work.

He knew I was upset,

But he still didn’t converse.

 

They seemed to get close every day,

And I had to pretend to not care,

Yes, it’s true that a smile hides a million tears,

And for me,

It was all true.

 

I didn’t tell anyone how I felt,

Because every love triangle,

Every love story,

Has only two lovers,

Till the very end

 

 

 

Reviews

[TheAimlessWanderer]

Yes, it’s true that a smile hides a million tears,
And for me,
It was all true. Great Lines !
your words were tinged with shadows and pain
about a girl twisted out of frame to endure the envy she chose to maim her face with a mask for in her mind it was not her story to write and the mask could keep the tears held tight until it started to break under the weight of that mistake
may have not been what you were going for but the whole thing was vivid to me thanks for the experience (: i really love how it flowed so effortlessly as a story/poem with so few words
Great write Shadowine !!

[iamshadowine]

Thank you so very much! :D

[TheAimlessWanderer]

i felt it deeply no need to thank me thank you for sharing (:

[Michelle Rachel]

So, you took my advise...I like it, and it's totally true. I've been there myself, and it's not pretty. Have you ever considered writing a poem where the good guy wins?? (just food for thought)

[iamshadowine]

Thank you for reading :D No, i haven't really

[Michelle Rachel]

You should!! From what I've read, you're really good at writing, and a trademark of a good writer is diversity of themes... Again, jut food for thought...

[Coyote Poetry]

You re right my friend.
"I didn’t tell anyone how I felt,
Because every love triangle,
Every love story,
Has only two lovers,
Till the very end"
The above lines are true logic. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[iamshadowine]

Thank you so much! :D

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Farhan Shaikh]

That was brilliant to read..indeed

[iamshadowine]

thank you :D

[D]

Happened to me as well...It`s not just sad..but worse...
Still, I kept hoping, till there was no doubts, i got replaced... So, I took the pain, and live with it... Great piece.

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[iamshadowine]

Thank you for your review :D

[D]

My pleasure.

[Dust That Drifts Throug..]

This is a good poem about a girl in love with a boy and then that boy leaving that girl for another one.

[iamshadowine]

Thank you :)

[Angel of the devil]

this is beautiful. i love it. amazing poem.

[iamshadowine]

Thank you :D

[Angel of the devil]

welcome :)