Love Triangle

It all started the day we talked.

I had never met such a genuine boy,

Such a gentleman,

Such a good friend

It was one of the best things that happened to me,

But good things have to come to an end.

 

We talked for hours,

He became my favorite,

I started liking him,

But for me, things never go straight.

 

I knew his favorite songs,

He told me about his dreams,

Nobody knew him better than me.

 

It all came to a near end,

When a girl,

A girl who was my friend,

Came between us

 

Our conversations subdued,

We only talked about work.

He knew I was upset,

But he still didn’t converse.

 

They seemed to get close every day,

And I had to pretend to not care,

Yes, it’s true that a smile hides a million tears,

And for me,

It was all true.

 

I didn’t tell anyone how I felt,

Because every love triangle,

Every love story,

Has only two lovers,

Till the very end

 

 

 

Reviews

[andrew mitchell]

How often does one see this happen or read about it.quite often like we are stepping stones in love. Nice write!

[iamshadowine]

Thank you ^_^

[Nessly]

You describe a feeling I've known pretty well... Beautifully written.

[iamshadowine]

Thank you! :D

[nupur chauhan]

gud description.. .................

[iamshadowine]

thank you!

[nupur chauhan]

welx...........................

[Emily]

I really like how you worded this!
Keep it up !

[iamshadowine]

Thank you ^_^

[Ardra]

Been there.... felt that :) oh when that someone spoils all that special things we shared it just get on ur nerves....
Very nicely expressed :)

[iamshadowine]

thank you :D

[Bala Gorthi]

Sad, but beautifully told! Your story telling is interesting...
Bala.

[iamshadowine]

Thank you ^_^

[Jackie]

Sad. But very beautiful. And a wonderful read. Thanks

[iamshadowine]

thank you :)

[Queen]

i really felt like i was in that situation;this is a beautiful peace I loved every word.

[iamshadowine]

thank you :D

[Queen]

no problem M8

[Sumo]

I truly felt immersed in this. Gorgeous work, I'm envious all my work must rhyme. I usually don't take to those that don't but this is beautiful. Thank you for sending me a read request.

[iamshadowine]

Thank you for reading :D

[BlakHeart]

This is such a great poem. You've express happiness in the first few stanzas then you've express a lot of pain on the next stanzas, and I must say I fell the pain that youve gone through. Falling in love or having fellings for your best friend is hard because their is assurance that s/he will love you back, also the friendship that you treasure might get ruin or destroyed and if you manage to fix your friendship,it might not be the same as it was before. Again great poem and thank you for sharing your thoughts :)

[iamshadowine]

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing :D