Pretend

His jokes and words could hide his 

love but his eyes couldn't

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

In a few words. You said everything. A amazing poem shared.
Coyote

[iamshadowine]

thank youuu :))

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Sandipta$]

Hidden feelings.... Nice😊😊😊😊

[Emily]

Great description and to the point...body language is a sign!

[iamshadowine]

Thank you very much :)

[R J Askew]

Optimist! :)))................

[iamshadowine]

Thank you :)

[Rebecca Leigh]

the eyes evoke everything to the viewer.... that is where you find honesty

[iamshadowine]

True indeed ^_^ Thanks

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Beautiful line!
It's so true!!
Creative and romantic :)
Keep writing!

[iamshadowine]

Thank you so much :)

[Cassie]

Very true. They say our eyes are the windows to our soul..lovely poem

[iamshadowine]

Thank you!!

[Michelle Rachel]

Aww...It's so truee!! I luv it!!

[iamshadowine]

Thank you ^_^

[Ashwin Shanker]

Eyes are the worst giveaway to our feelings. The gateway to our mind and emotions.

[Junebug]

a nice thought, but not complete enough to be a full poem.... write more!