Game

love is a game,

the winners rule,

the players struggle

and the beginners run.

Reviews

[mou]

it is a witty sharp knife indeed!! nothing to say,just TRUE :)

[iamshadowine]

Thank you ^_^

[SZHZIA]

You have well defined the love as a game. Really, though it has some characteristics of game but it is not a game. It is one of greatest truth we should accept. Indeed, we should not struggle to get love, because love is a gentle rain that drops itself not by force. In short you poem is beautiful as you painted you experiences in this four lines poem. Well written, thanks for sharing. Keep writing.

Best
Szhzia

[iamshadowine]

Thank you :D

[SZHZIA]

You are welcome.

[Poet]

The first lines were intriguing...powerful even, but the last line could be improved.

[iamshadowine]

Thank you :)