Game

love is a game,

the winners rule,

the players struggle

and the beginners run.

Reviews

[R J Askew]

What about the losers?! ....

[iamshadowine]

Theey fail and try again :)

[Grey Evanescent]

So true that I wish it wasn't. Nice piece.

[iamshadowine]

Thank you!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are right. Good to win in love. Very sad to lose in the game of love. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[iamshadowine]

Thank you! ^_^

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Cassie]

I like this, never thought of love this way. The beginners stage is best although do they pant as they run?

[iamshadowine]

Thank you ^_^

[Jackie]

Haha. Sounds true. Actually makes a lot of sense. ,:-)

[iamshadowine]

Thank you ^_^

[Dhes]

This poem is deep. I love how you write it. A brilliant writer!

[iamshadowine]

Thank you so much :D

[andrew mitchell]

the beginners run- puzzles me the most, but so does my own writings lol What do you mean!:)

[Gaurav]

Simple yet profound. Nice take on love prophecy. A game everyone is forced to play. Good one.

[iamshadowine]

Thank you so much ^_^

[Ashwin Shanker]

Absolutely true. I feel it is more of a game of power politics. One member in the relationship would be the one calling all the shots while the other meekly follows.

[iamshadowine]

Thank you ^_^