Sceneries

I SAW THE SNOW FALL,

I HEARD THE RIVER RUN,

I BREATHED THE FRESH AIR,

I SURVIVED THE SCORCHING SUN.

Reviews

[R J Askew]

Hmmm, not so taken with this one.

[Grey Evanescent]

For a few lines, it brings out so many meanings. Keep up. You're good. :)

[iamshadowine]

Thank you! ^_^

[Jackie]

Sounds like a hymn for survival, maybe. Anyhow. A lovely write so much said and so little. Seems you've been mastering that:-)

[iamshadowine]

Thank you :D

[D]

Sometimes just seemingly random scenes can say a lot.
Beautiful.

[iamshadowine]

Thank you very much for reading and reviewing :D

[D]

You`re welcome.

[Coyote Poetry]

Nice flow of thoughts. You took the reader with you to many places. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[iamshadowine]

Thank you so very much ^_^

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Kevin Gerardo]

So short yet so deep. Your poem seems to illustrate how we should be thankful and enjoy every single piece of our life. The snowfall, the river, the fresh air, and also the sun, are all the blessings from God.

[iamshadowine]

Thank you! ^_^

[Kevin Gerardo]

You are welcome :)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

That's what its all about, isn't it? Enjoying the scenery as well as getting along the hectic schedule of life.. All about balancing... Nice and short but deep!

[iamshadowine]

Thank you :D

[Dr. YumnaKay]

you are welcome :)

[Unknown Poet]

Really beautifully written ....
Last line is amazing "I SURVIVED THE SCORCHING SUN"

[iamshadowine]

Thank you :)

[Unknown Poet]

Most welcome

[SZHZIA]

An amazing scenes you have painted here. I love it.
Keep writing

Best
Szhzia

[iamshadowine]

Thank you!! :D

[SZHZIA]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.