Time

Well, it’s all about time,

The memories that we create

With the people we love,

With the people we trust

It doesn’t matter if,

The moments created were bad,

Or the memories were good,

Eventually,

When we will remember them,

We are going to laugh at our stupidity.

No matter how much you will want to relive those moments,

It’ll all just be a waste of time.

For time once gone,

Will never come back

It’s important to understand the way memories and time play with our emotions.

Don’t let your mind play with your heart,

Move on,

Make new memories,

Make a new start.

Because at the end,

Everything is about time.

Reviews

[R J Askew]

After reading your shorter ones this is like a warm up piece where you are getting yourself into the right mood to nail down two sharp lines. But then we all need to do our gym work to get poet fit. There are more syllables in some of the lines here than in some of your more effective two liners.

[iamshadowine]

Thank you!!

[Grey Evanescent]

And it's about darn time I realize that this poem is so true. :D It didn't really matter if the memories were good or bad. Thank you for this.

[iamshadowine]

Thank you for reading and reviewing 😄

[Emily]

Lovely poem!
Keep on writing!!

[D]

Exactly! I love every word. This one`s too relatable, who wouldn`t re-live the good days, or change a bad choice, if they`d have a chance.

[iamshadowine]

definitely! Thank you for your review :)

[D]

you`re welcome.

[SZHZIA]

You did not only leave a message on time but also its importance in our short life. We all learn good lesson from bad and good time that we spend. It also seems to me as an emotional poem. I love your thought. Keep it up.

Best
Szhzia

[iamshadowine]

Thank you so much ^_^

[SZHZIA]

my pleasure and you are welcome

[Nessly]

You touch on a great message with this piece. Time, once gone, can never be retrieved. There are those moments I once wished I hadn't endured, but I guess those moments also made me who I am today. There are also certain moments I wish I could hold and keep with me forever, but memories always seem to fade. I guess one of the beautiful things about time and memory is that everyone's are unique.

This piece is thought-provoking.

[iamshadowine]

Thank you very much ^_^

[Nessly]

Welcome :)

[Faren]

Amazing, thank you for sharing. I think we need to be reminded of Time every now and then. It is too easy to become stuck in the past.

[iamshadowine]

thank you so much :D

[rachellynn]

Love this. We often get so caught up on what used to be, that we sometimes forget to live. Time continues moving forward, and so should we. Thanks for sharing. :)

[iamshadowine]

Thank you :D

[BlakHeart]

This is simply amazing, just wow, every stanza, every line and evey words hits the spot. The peace is simply wonderful and maybe a little rhyme will make it more wonderful ^^

[iamshadowine]

Thank you :D

[Unknown Poet]

No words to express for this ..
Each n every stanzas n words are very touched n relatable to me... Thank you for sharing

[iamshadowine]

Thank you so much :D