Another Blank Page

It’s another blank page,

With feelings untold

It’s another sentence,

But without words

 

It’s another blank page,

With ink scribbled all over,

The ink that makes no sense

 

It’s another blank page,

With thoughts all over

Written with ink invisible

 

It’s another blank page,

Many thoughts to write,

Yet no words to describe

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I know this place. I use good song and reader to make the muse of writing to appear. Hard to write when the mind is locked-up. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[iamshadowine]

thank you! :D

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[R J Askew]

This seems to sum up what you were saying in the pvs one. It's more in the head and more organised than the pvs.
I rather like blank pages though because they are vast fields of potential ..... and there is nothing to disappoint us on them, as yet. So perhaps a blank page is a state of perfection which we can but diminish. Maybe there's a poem is this!!! A sort of apologia to the virgin page??? Maybe one to look at in the coming days. So I read beyond your requests. Your lines held my interest. *bows*

[iamshadowine]

Thank you so very much ^_^

[Michelle Rachel]

I've been there myself. It's a hard path to travel, and a long one at that, but don't give up. No matter what people say, you are precious. So many people read and comment on your writing, my news box is full of stuff with YOUR work. and it's really great to see that I'm not the only one out there with a talent, it's encouraging to see that someone out there is making an impression on people. I just wish it were a positive one.....

[iamshadowine]

That means a lot! Thank you so much :D

[Michelle Rachel]

Never a problem, I'm here to serve...

[J Todd Underhill]

I liked this piece, nonsense or not your words touch and effect people. Keep up the astounding work.

[iamshadowine]

Thank you!! :D

[Gee]

Just write it down, nonsense or not.....somebody will always make sense of it

[iamshadowine]

agreed! Thanks for reviewing :)

[mou]

it is wonderful!
specially like the line ---"It’s another blank page,

With ink scribbled all over,

The ink that makes no sense'
It is so nice that it makes me force to add it to my library..

[iamshadowine]

Thank you so much :D

[Nessly]

Loving the ideas of this piece. Thoughts aren't always easily felt or expressed.

[iamshadowine]

Thank you :)

[Cassie]

Just write down those thoughts. you will be amazed at how beautiful they will be

[iamshadowine]

Surely will :) thank you :D

[aLittlePain]

A hint of complacency here, a constant struggle for any writer I think.
You've expressed the process really well. Regards Ray

[iamshadowine]

Thank you :D

[Avinash]

Pause or they may call it writers block are actually the reinforcement time for any creative person.

[iamshadowine]

Thank you for your review :)