Lost In Thoughts

I'm lost 

In a maze of thoughts,

hoping to never find my way.

Reviews

[Emily]

Such a powerful meaning for such little words!
Keep on writing!!

[iamshadowine]

Thank you!!

[Angel of the devil]

tis powerful. i love this poem. tis very powerful! ;)

[iamshadowine]

Thank you!! :D

[iamshadowine]

Thank you!! :D

[Angel of the devil]

welcome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Jon Roggie]

Like a dream you don't want to awaken from,
and struggling to stay asleep.

Nice.

[iamshadowine]

Thank you :D

[andrew mitchell]

I love the brevity and this is spot on. Well done. I like the theme on thoughts which I do often but this is so good lol.

[iamshadowine]

Thank you :)

[Joshua Haines]

I truly understand this poem. That's why I really like it XD

[iamshadowine]

Thank you :D

[Diamond]

Its such a nice write. we often find ourselves in a loop of unending thoughts. that rarely have any outcome. Yet, its the job of the mind to generate them.

[iamshadowine]

Thank you! :)

[BlakHeart]

its true that our thoughts can be confusing and fun to play in mazes yet its sad to think that we get lost in a maze of thoughts. this is a good poem though i don't know why the author doesn't want to find his/her name

[iamshadowine]

Thank you :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, what fun would it be if we found our way out of thought...inspiration comes with the confusion.

j.

[iamshadowine]

Thank you! :D

[Nwang]

Haha.....this is great, loved what you have done here. Great creativity.

[iamshadowine]

Thank you :)