Pain Is....

Pain is...

A heart filled with distrust,

A mind filled with consciousness,

A soul filled with emptiness,

Desires unfulfilled,

Thoughts unwritten,

Places unexplored,

Lyrics unsung and

Love unspoken.

 

Reviews

[thaleeyaLuna]

You described and made readers emphatize what pain feels like with just a few meaningful lines. Great job. Keep writing! :)

[iamshadowine]

Thank you!

[andrew mitchell]

that just about sums this out, only the intensities of pain are a worry. nice work

[Maddi]

So beautifully written. Pain is all that, but sometimes it feels like so much more. Keep up the good work.

[iamshadowine]

Thank you! :)

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

Ouch. Pain is a poem as sad as this.

[iamshadowine]

Thank you!

[MightyMouse]

Beautiful. Describes pain nicely. Wish pain wasn't a feeling though. Would be nice to have everyone only happy all the time.

[iamshadowine]

Thank you! :D