Memories.Love.

PRESENT:

Now all I can do is stare him with her

and feel jealous.

Looking at them getting closer

and loving each other

*Sorry, let me tell you my mistake, let me tell you my past*

PAST:

I was on a trip,

with my best friend and him.

He and I became real good friends,

but I started feeling more of it.

The trip became the most precious memory to me,

It was the only place where he and I should be.

Everything seemed so beautiful,

Everything seemed so pretty,

Everything seemed so mine.

We had so much fun,

It was a lifetime memory indeed.

The trip was over,

but my feelings weren't.

Maybe I wanted to confess it to him,

but I never wanted to ruin what we had.

I called in for a get together,

And seeing him with someone else,

Made me uncomfortable...

He started liking her,

He got over me,

He got over whatever we had,

He still remained my friend,

like before,

But for me,

I fell in love with him.

Author's Note

P.S. This is my first poem on love ever :)

Reviews

[Grey Evanescent]

This really hurts. For your first poem on love, you did a great job. Keep up! :)

[iamshadowine]

Thank you =)

[Rebecca Leigh]

unrequited love is the most tragic of loves, I am sorry you have to endure it. its crushing to the soul

[Michelle Rachel]

You should write more....

[iamshadowine]

Thank you! ^_^

[Elizabeth J. Gelinger]

Nice poem, with a well constructed story. The feelings are well expressed to the readers, we can almost feel it ourselves. Also, very relatable. We all have a story or two about people we loved in the wrong timing. Good writing.

[iamshadowine]

Thank you :)

[Jackie]

This can be tough. I'm terribly sorry thus happened if there is any truth to it. Hope you find someone soon.:-)

[iamshadowine]

Thank you, but its all a work of fiction :p

[Nwang]

This is pretty good. Nice poem @Shadow. Keep writing :D

[iamshadowine]

Thank you :)

[Diamond]

Ohh so sweet. As time goes such pain flashes on the heart as a sweet memory. beautifully written.

[iamshadowine]

Thank you:)

[KittiesRulez]

Whoa this is insanely good! I absolutely love this, because of two reasons: 1. how it's written and 2. how it describes my current love life perfectly. Great work and keep writing please ^~^

[iamshadowine]

Thank you :D

[Johnny]

great work shadow! a bit sad though.. I always enjoy reading your work and congratulations on your first love poem! please read some of mine if they inspire you! take care!!

[iamshadowine]

Thank you and surely I will :)

[iamNeverheard]

The first poem that I had read for over 4 months :)
and I likely like wow.
..may you have more trips to come and more guys to find .haha

[iamshadowine]

lol! thank you :D