Memories.Love.

Memories.Love.

A Poem by iamshadowine

PRESENT:
Now all I can do is stare him with her
and feel jealous.
Looking at them getting closer
and loving each other

*Sorry, let me tell you my mistake, let me tell you my past*
PAST:
I was on a trip,
with my best friend and him.
He and I became real good friends,
but I started feeling more of it.
The trip became the most precious memory to me,
It was the only place where he and I should be.
Everything seemed so beautiful,
Everything seemed so pretty,
Everything seemed so mine.
We had so much fun,
It was a lifetime memory indeed.
The trip was over,
but my feelings weren't.
Maybe I wanted to confess it to him,
but I never wanted to ruin what we had.
I called in for a get together,
And seeing him with someone else,
Made me uncomfortable...
He started liking her,
He got over me,
He got over whatever we had,
He still remained my friend,
like before,
But for me,
I fell in love with him.

© 2016 iamshadowine


Author's Note

iamshadowine
P.S. This is my first poem on love ever :)

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This really hurts. For your first poem on love, you did a great job. Keep up! :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


iamshadowine

7 Years Ago

Thank you =)
unrequited love is the most tragic of loves, I am sorry you have to endure it. its crushing to the soul

Posted 7 Years Ago


You should write more....

Posted 7 Years Ago


iamshadowine

7 Years Ago

Thank you! ^_^
Nice poem, with a well constructed story. The feelings are well expressed to the readers, we can almost feel it ourselves. Also, very relatable. We all have a story or two about people we loved in the wrong timing. Good writing.

Posted 8 Years Ago


iamshadowine

8 Years Ago

Thank you :)
This can be tough. I'm terribly sorry thus happened if there is any truth to it. Hope you find someone soon.:-)

Posted 8 Years Ago


iamshadowine

8 Years Ago

Thank you, but its all a work of fiction :p
This is pretty good. Nice poem @Shadow. Keep writing :D

Posted 8 Years Ago


iamshadowine

8 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Ohh so sweet. As time goes such pain flashes on the heart as a sweet memory. beautifully written.

Posted 8 Years Ago


iamshadowine

8 Years Ago

Thank you:)
Whoa this is insanely good! I absolutely love this, because of two reasons: 1. how it's written and 2. how it describes my current love life perfectly. Great work and keep writing please ^~^

Posted 8 Years Ago


iamshadowine

8 Years Ago

Thank you :D
great work shadow! a bit sad though.. I always enjoy reading your work and congratulations on your first love poem! please read some of mine if they inspire you! take care!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


iamshadowine

8 Years Ago

Thank you and surely I will :)

The first poem that I had read for over 4 months :)
and I likely like wow.
..may you have more trips to come and more guys to find .haha

Posted 8 Years Ago


iamshadowine

8 Years Ago

lol! thank you :D

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Added on August 15, 2016
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