Strange

Loud wind,

Ice cold,

Three layers of coats on,

Fog smoking out of mouth.

As I walk down the gray stone road,

I find I creepy house.

Trees dancing,

Water dripping,

Wooden logs broken,

Spiders crawling

I knock the door,

I ring the bell,

“Hello? Is somebody in there?”

Door opens,

Sound creeps,

Window panes bang,

Darkness increase

I look for light switches,

But I can hear only my footsteps,

As I take another step,

I step on a soft thing kept by.

“Meow” the cat sounds,

I scream,

I run out of the house,

And I see the name plate beneath,

‘Mr. Kitty, since 1926 till

Eternity’

Reviews

[DRAGO]

I love the rythem. SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO awesome!

[iamshadowine]

thank you!!

[Sanhorsey]

I don't the sentence, 'I find I creepy house,' a bit odd. Couldn't really understand it.
But otherwise the poem was good. Not one with a deep meaning I would say, but it definitely was exciting and had unexpected twist in the end.

[iamshadowine]

thank you!!

[Addict With a Pen]

Great write! The ending caught my by surprise, I didn't expect quite that, but I guess the title isn't there for nothing. I liked when you started describing the broken logs and the spiders, very creepy setting.

[iamshadowine]

thank you!

[Vatsal Rohilla (account..]

Really strange, but amazing. I have come across ghost stories, but this is the first ghost poem I have come across. Pretty well penned. Keep writing.

[iamshadowine]

thank you!! :D

[GalaxyGhost]

The ending made me laugh it was hilarious. I really like this style of writing and it is really interesting as I can picture the whole scenario and it wasn't complicated or anything like that. It is simple and it tells a really cool story and that's what I really liked about it.

[iamshadowine]

thank you so much! :D

[rcheydn]

A new style for me, but very interesting.

[iamshadowine]

thank you :D