Strange

Loud wind,

Ice cold,

Three layers of coats on,

Fog smoking out of mouth.

As I walk down the gray stone road,

I find I creepy house.

Trees dancing,

Water dripping,

Wooden logs broken,

Spiders crawling

I knock the door,

I ring the bell,

“Hello? Is somebody in there?”

Door opens,

Sound creeps,

Window panes bang,

Darkness increase

I look for light switches,

But I can hear only my footsteps,

As I take another step,

I step on a soft thing kept by.

“Meow” the cat sounds,

I scream,

I run out of the house,

And I see the name plate beneath,

‘Mr. Kitty, since 1926 till

Eternity’

Reviews

[MICASA]

wooooohhhhhhhhhh........in the starting its just full of suspence...i like the ending.........u write really very well!!!! keep it up so that i could get more poems of yours to read in future..have a good night!!!

[iamshadowine]

thank you! :D

[Arooj Purra]

Hello...what is written in this poem one can definitely imagine that thing ...I can say the words used are simple and therefore a person can easily understand this poem and can create a scene of the situation.nice poem

[iamshadowine]

thank you! :D

[Arooj Purra]

your welcome

[prashant]

the name of the poem should have been "imagination" as this poem outlines the fears or imaginations felt by children's .a good simple poem.

[iamshadowine]

Thank you :)

[Lerew]

To the point. i like that.

[iamshadowine]

Thank you ☺

[BlakHeart]

This is a great poem it started of with a creapy beagining and a very cute end . Love the twist

[iamshadowine]

thank you!! :D

[Earl Schumacker]

Hi Shadowine, This was very enjoyable. You tell a nice tale. Very entertaining. Have a great day. Earl

[iamshadowine]

thank you and you too! :D

[M]

I like the environment you built with your writing- well done.
"Loud wind,
Ice cold,
Three layers of coats on"
love it!
simple, yet very descriptive.

[iamshadowine]

thank you :D

[Raylene]

I found this cute and funny it started off like a scary story and ended in an odd ending that is both charming and unique

[iamshadowine]

thank you so much :D

[Raylene]

Anytime dear

[jacob erin-cilberto]

nine lives they have...and the speaker in this poem only has one and better be careful or he or she will be scared half to death...and as steven wright asks..."what happens if you get scared to death twice?"

[iamshadowine]

thank you for your visit :D

[Shabeeh Haider]

Nicely written with a fine twist at the end.
Well done

[iamshadowine]

thank you!