Answer Me?

Can you tell me why I exist,

No feeling in my heart persist?

Can you tell me why I die,

Everyday a monotonous cry?

To change the past, or to strive,

For the better, or is it all a lie?

Reviews

[Jon Roggie]

A question only answered by the individual. Which do you prefer?
I prefer to strive.

[iamshadowine]

Thank you :)

[zwartenkot]

I loved how much meaning this had, you used very few words to create something powerful and something that a lot of us wonder ourselves
Well done!

[iamshadowine]

Thank you :)

[Lydia Shutter]

Only you can figure out why you exist and where you are going. No one else can tell you the answers to those questions. Easy to relate to your words. LydI**

[iamshadowine]

thank you :D

[rachellynn]

Very relatable. Well done.

[iamshadowine]

Than you 😇

[Writtenments]

Questions seeking answers is one of humanity's quest There are no lies just false truths. I enjoyed this piece.
Keep up the great work.

[iamshadowine]

Thank you 😄

[Marianne Rose]

I completely relate to these questions, asking them differently across my lifescape. Answering them differently depending on the phase of life I travel through. They are always with us. Great expression of our shared existential questions and feelings. Thank you!

[iamshadowine]

Thank you :)

[Cassie]

This is so so good, the last lines flow so nicely

[iamshadowine]

Thank you :)

[Aks]

Nice lines..... Can relate to in many ways.... Good work

[iamshadowine]

thank you :)

[zunie frost]

Nice flow and i love way you named this poem and very unique way of asking question like that

[iamshadowine]

thank you! :D