Answer Me?

Can you tell me why I exist,

No feeling in my heart persist?

Can you tell me why I die,

Everyday a monotonous cry?

To change the past, or to strive,

For the better, or is it all a lie?

Reviews

[Sweet]

I really enjoyed this poem and the meanings lying underneath.
Great questions. I always see life as a never-ending rollercoaster with highs and lows.
It's up to us to make the best out of it and grasp the bright side out of every situation, although it might be really difficult at times.

[iamshadowine]

thank you!! :D

[FJ Davis]

Lies only change our perception of reality; reality, itself, cannot lie.
You exist; you are living; you will die.
Them's the rules.
Graceful acceptance is our best option.
Your work, Shadowine, both conveys and provokes thought.
Stimulating read!

[iamshadowine]

thank you! :D

[Tessah]

Maybe you exist so that, when the time is right, you have a reason to be there in that place and time to be there for someone... or something along those lines.

[iamshadowine]

Thank you 😊

[Coyote Poetry]

A very good question in the poetry.
"To change the past, or to strive,
For the better, or is it all a lie?"
I believe every life had value. Each of us to do our part. I liked the questions in the poetry. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[iamshadowine]

thank you!!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[prettybretty]

Such a beautiful, painful expression of what some of us all feel. xx

[iamshadowine]

Thank you (^.^)

[mou]

a continuous journey through a silent question-answer round..you express the feelings with the usage of beautiful words and keep it to the point..
nice work..

[iamshadowine]

Thank you (^～^)

[Lost, n'MT]

Wow, so concise yet so beautifully expressed. I greatly enjoyed this!

[iamshadowine]

Thank you(*^▽^*)

[faithmuriithi]

I really love your pieces. Great work!

[iamshadowine]

thank you :D

[Marcus Sergiu David]

Another short piece of amazing work. Deep questions to answer in the darkness of the night, before falling asleep. Loved it :)

[iamshadowine]

thank you :)

[Chrys Marie]

Existential crisis, something I'm sure we've all gone through at some point in out lives. Who hasn't asked themselves these questions? I think no one. It's nice how you capture these thoughts into words, for this is a matter I really have a hard translating into words so people can understand. Well done.

[iamshadowine]

Thank you😄