Dead, Yet Alive

There's an empty space in my heart,

and it is yet to be filled,

filled with joy,

filled with love,

filled with happiness.

There's an empty heart,

filled with loneliness,

filled with abhor,

filled with abjection,

which is yet to be understood.

There's an empty space in my heart,

yet filled with grief,

filled with betrayal,

filled with apathy.

   AND

There's a dead soul,

residing my body,

filled with mixed emotions,

filled with beautiful flaws

and burnt pieces of trust

which can't be cured.

Reviews

[rachellynn]

Beautifully written. The effects of a broken heart on one's soul, hard to completely heal, yet still possible. Thank you for sharing.

[iamshadowine]

thank you! :D

[prashant]

a nice poem describing loneliness of a person.right choice of words

[iamshadowine]

thank you!!

[Meshalini]

Really great poem..you described the soul very good... Keep it up..

[iamshadowine]

thank you!

[PhoenixDown]

"...Yet Alive." There is still time.

[iamshadowine]

thank you! :D

[mou]

the situation of a wound soul is described beautifully..
profound write!
keep it up and thanks for sharing with us

[iamshadowine]

thank you! ^_^

[Coyote Poetry]

Your words true and honest.
"There's a dead soul,
residing my body,
filled with mixed emotions,
filled with beautiful flaws
and burnt pieces of trust
which can't be cured."
I believe we never forget and can heal. The scars of heart-break. Reminders to be careful. I liked the directness and the truth in the words. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[iamshadowine]

thank you!! :D

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Laurie]

It's interesting how you are able to make darkness and sorrow beautiful in their own way. Keep it up!

[iamshadowine]

Thank you ^_^

[Kim]

Fitting title, the message you're conveying is clear and delivered expertly. Great write!

[iamshadowine]

Thank you ~°•°~

[Raylene]

Great reputation a poem of inner conflict done beautiful great work

[iamshadowine]

thank you :D

[Raylene]

Anytime dear :)

[Vatsal Rohilla (account..]

This is a very lovely poem. Good use of repetition. The way you have used the word "filled" is excellent. The sorrow and sadness expressed in your poems is always powerful and deep. In this piece it has been inked more vividly and intensely. Great work. Keep writing.

[iamshadowine]

thank you!! :)