Death Trap

Thinking in the darkness is a death trap,

and I'm it's favourite prey.

Reviews

[12.09am]

SO simplistic, yet so effective! Love this :)

[iamshadowine]

thank you :D

[Sweet]

I love this ^_^ It's so true, and we fall so easily into the trap. I love philosophy and psychology. Thinking over and over, and try to understand the meaning of things. These metaphors you write leave me thinking deeply, they are amazing.
Keep up the good work!

[iamshadowine]

thank you !

[FaeryQueen]

hmmm... i've been in hiatus for a while, thinking the writer's block would pass if i read my own poetry over again. i resisted and read some others and this has me thinking now, what exactly, that is the question. thank you for peaking my interest.

[iamshadowine]

thank you!!

[Addict With a Pen]

It's interesting how you created this idea about the darkness. I like the poem, its very creative and Its kind of leading me to think you mean 'thinking in the darkness' as a form of suicidal thought? If so it is a very deep concept to write about, and makes this poem have more of a sad feel.

[iamshadowine]

thank you very much :D

[Jon Roggie]

This is a honest write. Also, it is easy to fall into that trap.

[iamshadowine]

thank you :)

[AliciaB]

I have definitely been here. My high school English teacher called it "the three-AM demons." Darkness and imagination are a terribly powerful combination. Excellent work!

[iamshadowine]

thank you :D

[Ruth]

Wow, this holds such poignant impact. Impressively so. Concise and a brilliant piece :)

[iamshadowine]

thank you :))

[ARLorenz]

Thanks for requesting that I read this. I'm glad I did!

[iamshadowine]

thank you :D

[Carolynn]

Great short poem with a powerful punch! Spending too much time on the dark side one can definitely end up in entrapment (look what happened to Darth Vader hahaha jk) Good job!

[iamshadowine]

lol, thank you so much :D

[UnapologeticPoet]

Powerful! Very powerful! So much is said in just these two lines. It is amazing how just a few words can spark such a great message. Love it!

[iamshadowine]

Thank you!!