Nightmare

Nightmare

A Poem by iamshadowine

A nightmare is something that wakes you up at night just to tell you that,
even dreams can be alive

© 2016 iamshadowine


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Making such an impression with just twenty words(yes, I counted)! Admirable.

Posted 8 Years Ago


iamshadowine

8 Years Ago

thank you!! :D
I never thought of it this way, that's rather creepy. Very well done. I wish I had thought of writing this.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Ohh, you sure have lot of psychology stuff. your knowledge is commendable.
I love this one which only those can relate to who have been under it.

Posted 8 Years Ago


iamshadowine

8 Years Ago

thank you so much :D
Wow. I loved the brevity of this piece. Great work.

Posted 8 Years Ago


iamshadowine

8 Years Ago

thank you :)
This is just wonderful! But it does not do to dwell in dreams and forget to live ourselves.

Posted 8 Years Ago


GalaxyGhost

8 Years Ago

Yay! You win 50 points to the house you're in! I'm a Harry Potter fan! (Ravenclaw, Alder wand with a.. read more
iamshadowine

8 Years Ago

gryffindor
GalaxyGhost

8 Years Ago

50 points for Gryffindor!!! :D
Succinct, I love it! The harsh reality is that as long as we live, everything that we can experience can affect our lives. Keep it up! :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


iamshadowine

8 Years Ago

thank you :D
Wow, this is is amazing. You should do more of this type of work. I really liked this one :)


Posted 8 Years Ago


iamshadowine

8 Years Ago

thank you :D
Another stunner ! :) You must give yourself more credit than you usually do..

Posted 8 Years Ago


iamshadowine

8 Years Ago

thank you so much!! this comment made my day :D
A lovely profound write. its just lucky we do wake up!

Posted 8 Years Ago


iamshadowine

8 Years Ago

thank you!!
Personally speaking, I always feel more alive after having a nightmare - my nightmares always seem to be more interesting than my actual life.

And that last line is so perfect! It reminds me of how the subconscious is like some sort of raw, uncontrollable entity that surfaces every once in a while just so we can question our past actions and identities. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


iamshadowine

8 Years Ago

thank you :D

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Added on June 22, 2016
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