How Does It Feel?

How does it feel?

When you're oblivion

How do you think?

When no one cares

How does it feel, when you’re missing something special?

How do you know it’s right

How does it feel?

Letting your close ones go?

How do you think?

About not thinking about them

How does it feel?

When your lover is with someone else

How do you think?

To not get back to them

How does it feel?

When you’re talented

And how do you feel?

When people just ignore it?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Old wisdom. Don't concern yourself with other people opinions. Trust in your own opinions and thoughts.
"When you’re talented
And how do you feel?
When people just ignore it?"
Hardest people to impress. Are the people near. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[iamshadowine]

Thank you very much

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[revalatia]

When reading this particular piece, I remember asking myself the exact same questions directed toward the acts of another..As if teaching them a lesson in Karma. ..Meanwhile, that person was asking themselves the same question directed back upon me.... for similar acts I had committed myself... Ironically, the madness began while attempting to demonstrate to another person how it felt to walk a mile in another person's shoes.(by giving back what I believed they took from me in turn ...)
..So.. I look back and now ask myself your question.. "How does it feel?"
A little like this! lol

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IHQr0HCIN2w

(gonna add that to my profile page ha!).. Awesome read btw..Thank you very much for sharing your art..

[iamshadowine]

Thank you very much

[C_theSurrealist]

When I am reading those questions on your poem, it hits me like a bullet. Very expressive. Keep writing!! :)

[iamshadowine]

Thank you :)

[UnapologeticPoet]

Not sure why I am just discovering this, but it is amazing! I have a strong sense of imagery when I read this I cannot put my finger on why but it happens. Great work!!

[iamshadowine]

Thank you!

[Nwang]

Angsty and dark. A feeling everyone gets at least once in their lifetime. Really nicely put.

[iamshadowine]

Thank you 😊

[Elizabeth J. Gelinger]

Really nice poem, it speaks the question I know many people ask themselves in a daily basis. Simple but rich, I really enjoyed it.

[iamshadowine]

Thank you 😀

[mou]

it is just awesome..you have spoken the words of mine..
really such a sound is never listened ...It makes me push to add it to my favorite ...

[iamshadowine]

Thank youu

[Lost, n'MT]

The emotion you convey mixed with the style of your writing is extremely enjoyable to read. I can feel, relate, and appreciate the emotion needed to write this piece. I thought this along with other pieces I have been reading flows really well and is very well written. Excellently expressed!

[iamshadowine]

Thank you so much(≧∇≦)/

[Lost, n'MT]

You're very welcome! : )

[Rose]

Wow this is really good you feel it speaks to your heart that's really amazing. I think many people can relate to this.

[iamshadowine]

thank you! :)

[Grey Evanescent]

I would feel like a substance more gratuitous than ashes. Existing only to be blown by mere breezes.
:D

I love this piece. I love your writings
The way the questions make us ponder, awakening us to truth.

KEEP CALM AND LOOOVE WRITING!~~ :D

[iamshadowine]

thank you!! :D