Wild Heart

Anger and aggression everyone saw,

no one knew the real me,

getting my heart ripped with a tiger's claw,

no more fresh air to breathe.

I've become succumb,

I've become numb.

There's nothing worth a fight,

There's nothing to think at night.

no more friends alike,

please come to this world of mine,

There's a lot, and things are just more than fine.

I'm in a world of angels finding fake,

I tell them I'm from a world where fake is what they make.

I asked them how did I enter this world?

They told me, when you hung yourself onto the fan and people cursed.

Reviews

[Ria Carol]

Bravo!...great job and good write

[Jesse W.]

There's a sense of sadness in this one, a kind of revulsion at the state of things. I guess that's why you chose to call it Wild Heart, though I have to admit even so the title is confusing to me. The poem itself is very well done, it is sad and shocking, and the ending through me for a loop. Still, that title confuses me a bit. Otherwise, great work.

[Vatsal Rohilla (account..]

This is a lovely piece of writing. Sadness, sorrow runs throughout your poem. The way you have called the world a place where "fake is what people make" is simply superb. The ending was unexpected, but well-penned. "When you hung yourself onto the fan and people cursed" Well-written. Keep writing.

[iamshadowine]

thank you!! :)

[Emily]

Lovely write!
Keep up the great work!

[iamshadowine]

thank you!!

[The Poet of Black Wings]

I was very confused reading this.

[lightning-born]

although short, you got the emotions across very well. as someone who experienced similar feelings and had someone close to me get to that point, i think you did a very good job.

[iamshadowine]

thank you :D

[Unknown Poet]

Very touching
Very strong image
"getting my heart ripped with a tiger's claw,"
Most convincing sentences...
"I'm in a world of angels finding fake,
I tell them I'm from a world where fake is " 👍👍👍👍👏😉
Great work

[iamshadowine]

thank you so muchh!! :D

[Perplexation]

Very relatable in my mind.
Keep it up.

[iamshadowine]

thank you!! :D

[Riti Rajput]

A sad piece of a broken heart.... You write really well... Thanks for sharing...

[iamshadowine]

thank you!!