The Night thinker

I’m still awake and the world’s asleep,

I’m still thinking of the secrets hidden within me,

Deep in the blue sea, I’m trying to leave.

There’s salty air and sand beneath.

My imagination is trying to escape,

There are a lot of walls I still need to break.

Another thought but no listener,

Another jail but no prisoner

I lost this life, I lost this night

I need one more night to get this right.

I am night thinker and

There are things left worth a fight.

Reviews

[Vatsal Rohilla (account..]

You have something new, something fresh to offer here. Good comparisons. Night thinker- I am a night thinker too- but I can never talk of it in the way you have. Simply extraordinary. The best time to think or to anything is either early morning or late night. I prefer the latter- you do the same- getting up early is too difficult, isn't it? Keep writing.

[iamshadowine]

getting up early is hard work! and tysm for your review! :D

[Nirupama.H]

Good work . Loved the piece !
Nirupama

[iamshadowine]

thank you!!

[Ria Carol]

Bravo!. Amazing! absolutely a delight to read. You have outdone yourself :)
Keep writing

[iamshadowine]

thank you! I'm glad you liked it :D