The Night thinker

I’m still awake and the world’s asleep,

I’m still thinking of the secrets hidden within me,

Deep in the blue sea, I’m trying to leave.

There’s salty air and sand beneath.

My imagination is trying to escape,

There are a lot of walls I still need to break.

Another thought but no listener,

Another jail but no prisoner

I lost this life, I lost this night

I need one more night to get this right.

I am night thinker and

There are things left worth a fight.

Reviews

[aziza]

"Another thought but no listener".....that particular line is very distinct to me ,well written

[iamshadowine]

thank you :D

[Diamond]

Your subject matter is very mysterious. But I love the way you are giving waves in my spine!

[iamshadowine]

thank you!!

[Cyndy Robinson]

This is great, by far the best piece I have read. I love it! Good imagery and concise!

[Dina AbuElkher]

I liked that! It touches many night thinkers! Bravo!

[iamshadowine]

thank you so much :D

[aLittlePain]

Love this! Resonates with me...love how you left us something to ponder over at the end.

Regards
Rach

[iamshadowine]

thank you! :D

[Perplexation]

The night time sky allows the mind to flow endlessly into space and time.
When you come to realize the true meaning behind the human imagination, you will also realize, the fight is worth the battle...

[H.L. Cerveise]

Thank you for this writing. Your mind/heart/soul echo what its like to not be able to turn the mind off at night. It is one thing that makes us write. To let those thoughts out in the only way that helps. Loved it.

[iamshadowine]

thank you so much :D

[Emily]

Loved it!
Keep on writing!

[iamshadowine]

thank you!!

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the thoughts and the need in the poetry.
"I am night thinker and
There are things left worth a fight."
Good to ponder hope and dreams. Good to set-up life and hope. I liked the above lines and thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[iamshadowine]

thank you :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[FaeryQueen]

another color added to the palate... how interesting. i like your style of writing. what that would be? hmm... i'm not so sure

[iamshadowine]

shadowine style maybe :P thank you so much