ATHEIST

Tang Tang the bell rings,

Hymns that they all chant,

What is it all about?

Do they actually know the meaning of the hymns?

Do they know who he is?

Do they know that does he really exist?

The one they keep blaming,

The one they keep praising,

The one they keep worshipping.

I don't say it's wrong.

Believe in a soul,

Believe in one,

Don't be a fuss,

Don't build chaos.

Chanting wouldn't help

Worshipping wouldn't save

It's the belief in you

That'll make you brave. 

Or you must just say

That I should stay quiet

And tell me to believe the priest

But oh! I am sorry, I am merely an atheist.

Reviews

[Bear]

Critique: (Do they know that does he really exist?) Do they know that he really exist?
(Believe in a soul) An incomplete sentence, you need an identifier consider "To believe in a soul"
(Believe in one) same with this line it needs an identifier consider "Believe in the one"

Review: Nice topic and I like the way you present the concept of faith as belief in what priest say. Worship and hymns are anything but a path to heaven (if there really is one) and prayers people made like wishes leads one to question how many unfulfilled wishes does it take to open heaven's gate. Standing Ovation! Four out of five Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap!

[Emily]

I really liked this!
I really the the beginning the most!
Keep it up!

[iamshadowine]

thank you :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Honest and good words. I believe each of us find what we need. Some people need God and some people need to touch the soil, water and the trees to know peace. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[iamshadowine]

thank you so much for reading it :D

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.