Beholder's beauty

She was the best thing anyone could have ever written,

But people ignored her because of the cover she was wrapped within.

Nobody knew the beautiful words printed in her,

Nobody knew how knowledgeable she was.

She was a heavy book with love readable,

but everyone treated her as an untouchable.

She was an open book,

but no one was interested even for a look.

The first page had some words magical,

But the readers had to be logical.  

Reviews

[Amy R]

Amazing!
I loved the way u wrote this.
keep it up!

[iamshadowine]

thank you so much

[Amy R]

ur welcome! :)

[Ria Carol]

You have amazing talent!. ITs beautifully expressed and your concept is awesome. Keep writing :)

[iamshadowine]

i'm so glad you liked it! thank you so much :D

[Aprille]

Many people failed to see what lies between, they are just attracted by outside gleam. I like your poem - the imagery, and metaphor. Thanks for sharing beautiful piece. :)

[iamshadowine]

thank you so much! :D

[Aprille]

your welcome. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed the poem. Some people are hidden diamonds. Few seek to see the true person. I like the flow of thoughts leading to solid ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[iamshadowine]

thank you :D

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Insight "MH"]

Wonderful Imagery from top to bottom. You must look closer to see the reality of anything especially the human inside the body.

[iamshadowine]

thank you :)

[Cyndy Robinson]

I love this! Especially the metaphors! Wonderful job.

[iamshadowine]

thank you :D

[Emily]

I love the way you started it!
Keep it up!!

[iamshadowine]

thank you :D

[Jesse W.]

As far as metaphors go, this one is incredibly salient. Everyone feels as though they would be interesting if someone would look at them. For some, it's no big deal as they have friends, even significant others to read them. Others are crying out for that attention, and this girl seems like the latter. It's easy to sympathize with her. Nice work.

[iamshadowine]

thank you:))

[Elizabeth Ridge]

I love the poem. Though simple, it still gives a good look into this girl. The metaphors worked amazingly and really sparked your poem. Great job!

[iamshadowine]

thank you :D

[Indigo Rose]

I love this :) Really good work!

[iamshadowine]

thank you :D