Teenage

Why is always with the teens?

Anger and depression mostly seen

Is it natural or it’s just me?

Want to create wonders but is always busy,

Playing is a fault

And studying never called

Parents are ashamed

And friends all with fame

Scolding at home, praises at school

Whom to listen, where to go?

One day talked to myself calmly and asked what did my heart say?

Listen to the brain not me, teenage is just a new game.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I believe hardest years, 17-21. Time for kids to create path and life.
"Listen to the brain not me, teenage is just a new game."
I told my children. You will fall often. Just keep heading toward your goal and be fearless. A amazing poem. Make me think tonight. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[iamshadowine]

thank you for reading it! :) i'm glad that you liked it :D

[Coyote Poetry]

I did and you are welcome.

[barleygirl]

Having a hard time reading mixed verb tenses. Not a fan of discarding basic English, but perhaps this reflects your subject matter in many ways. Teens don't want to follow rules, right? You've brought up many ideas that make us all scratch our heads about teenagers. At the same time, we remember doing our own version of the teen tempest. Interesting message. I'd like to see it expanded.

[iamshadowine]

definitely i'll give you an expanded version. thank you so much :)

[Diamond Dunbar]

Indeed, its like you know your parents won't understand or even comprehend because times has changed and you just trying to make it

[iamshadowine]

thank you :D