Gone

Gone

A Poem by Ramblings of a Mediocre Mind

I turned around
And you were there.
We were staring at each other's eyes
Like time did not exist
Like nothing else mattered.
Those piercing blue eyes
Boring into my soul
Digging into my being.
You alone knew
Only you.
I stepped closer to you
Heart pounding every step I took.
I reached out my hand
Eager to feel you again
Aching to hold you in my arms.
I reached out
Almost touching you
Almost within my grasp.
And then
You were gone.

© 2011 Ramblings of a Mediocre Mind


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This can mean more than one thing as when I first read it I thought of one imagining past times and lost love but on re Reading was reminded of one of my own I saw him today were one sees themselves has they were in a mirror image and then once more the present intrudes and we are lost. However this is read it is still emotional, I love the tender expression of self. Keep em' coming

Posted 13 Years Ago


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A mirage obviously, or is it? What's a woman, life and what am I? These would be important questions for one to look at. A poem that's a door to another world.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I came because of a read request... I WILL return - without one.

Very felt and well spoken.

Chris

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

If this is mediocrity, I'd hate to see what s**t looks like.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

:(

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This can mean more than one thing as when I first read it I thought of one imagining past times and lost love but on re Reading was reminded of one of my own I saw him today were one sees themselves has they were in a mirror image and then once more the present intrudes and we are lost. However this is read it is still emotional, I love the tender expression of self. Keep em' coming

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Quezon City, National Capital Region, Philippines



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