Short Story 1

Short Story 1

A Story by Kelsy
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Free style! Just thinking stuff on the top of my head!

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I woke sweating in my bed looking around for my phone. I felt terrible waking up from that dream...It was about my Grandfather. He died over a year ago. But I can't get this feeling off like I'm going to see him any second. I been having this dream every month since his death. I felt a bump under my back and sat up and took my phone and checked the time. It was 3:04 and I had a text message. I opened it and It said it was sent by a unknown phone. I read the text and my heart started to beat rapidly. I couldn't believe my eyes. 
It said- " It won't be soon. -Love Grand Daddy. "  
Tears rolled down my face like a waterfall. I got up quickly and ran to my sister's room before I went in to the room I froze. It was him...

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© 2011 Kelsy


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So not finished keepkeepkeep writing!

Posted 12 Years Ago


wow - very nice ~ go with it - I would read on ....

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is good. I like the first couple lines. It might be more effective with a little more build up/ back story before the text.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on December 8, 2011
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