Untitled Song

Trying to write a love song. Tell me what you think.

Guys part:

Day fly by

Things change

All over the world

Yet my love for you

Grows stronger

Each and every day

 

Both:

My heart stops

When I see you

Every day

I beileve in you

As you belive in me

Our love

Could stop a forest fire

 

Girls part:

The sun rises and then sets

Every day

That will never change

Just as my love

Its a flow that never ends (Guy echo)

 

Both:

Show me the river

And Ill cross it

No rushing water

Can ever stop me from loving you

Author's Note

What should I write next tell me what you think?

Reviews

[salvador (camuel choisu..]

really liked it i just didnt knoiw what kind of music it was so it was hard to get into the tune other than that i really enjoyed it.us

[Coyote Poetry]

It is beautiful poem and song. Very good movement and strong emotions of hope and love. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote