All long

Finished: 4-25-10 Inspired by: Pake

 

Never ending line of trees

Marching up the hill

To bring doom

With each step

They take

I take refudge

In your arms

For enterity

No one can reach

Me now

The trees die away

But that was

Your plan all long

Author's Note

Finished: 4-25-10
Inspired by: Pake

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I need more description. The poem create a vision of a lonely road and the feel of emptiness. Hidden story and reason in the poem. A interesting tale.
Coyote

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

vivid imagery~ melancholy like a shadow crossing the stream of expressions~