In His Eyes

Look at us now

We walk separate paths

Roads to where

Will we meet agian

Some say it wasn't

Meant to be

Yet when you said

Lets try it for real

It made me happy

I wanted to

Now its time

To say goodbye

My land of Oc

Is far away from

The realm you

Go to

Friends will comfort

Me in the time

We are apart

What a way to start

Off this new

Real relationship

We'll Skype, call and text

You say

Right before you

Get into the car

You draw me into

Your arms

Tears dwell in

My eyelids

You pull back and

Look into my eyes

"I'll miss you and

Your blue storm clouds eyes"

I blush at your words

Then I say

"I'll miss your hugs

Plus you, yourself"

I draw my head

Into your kneck

As the tears

Finally start to fall

In these long months

We have grown

To show each other love

Now starts our long distant relationship

When we finally

Break away

You land your kiss

Upon my lips

For an brief moment

Then he lips reappear

On my forehead

Before he backs up

And steps into his car

I kiss the hood of it

Tell him to be careful

He looks back as

My friend draws me

Into a hug

My other friend said

She saw

Tears in his eyes

Author's Note

Finished: 10-17-10

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I bet there was tears in his eyes. Goodbyes leave no winners. A very good poem. You told a sad story of two people being separated. I like the feel and emotion of the words. You wrote a sad and powerful poem. A excellent poem.
Coyote