Only inkling

Only inkling

A Poem by Liz Alexander

If we were never meant to be

Why is it I have an image in my head

One that consist of the two of us

A beauty comes alive

Even thou in my mind I know

That the chances of you ever seeing me

In that way

Are slimmer than me

Getting into law school

So why is that my heart?

Still has this inkling of hope that

I can convince you to see me in

That way

It is a fight that cause

My brain to beat my heart

And yet I am still left with that inkling

Only inkling

© 2010 Liz Alexander


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Since I believe poetry is a way to share feelings, if we are to feel your feelings a little better, maybe a more universal way of describing your perceived chances other than comparing it to your chances to get into law school. This might make perfect sense to you, but to the general reader we might need something that we can all relate to better. Good Luck.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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even an inkling can spread itself into full bloom~

Posted 14 Years Ago


An inkling of hope is sometimes enough.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Since I believe poetry is a way to share feelings, if we are to feel your feelings a little better, maybe a more universal way of describing your perceived chances other than comparing it to your chances to get into law school. This might make perfect sense to you, but to the general reader we might need something that we can all relate to better. Good Luck.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on October 18, 2010
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Liz Alexander
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In College. My major is Missions. Trying to pave my own way I love writing about wonders, romance, and God. more..

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