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Just let the words flow off my fingers no thoughts just words. So it might not make since

Tell me a story

Of a hard ship you have had

Days in the end

Can bring hard times

To the listening ear

Days go on even

When you are in pain

The words inspire people

To sing

Every day is a new experience

For the words of the time

Bring a listening ear

Let me tell you a story

In return

Then both can move on

The fire between us

Moves on

To others in pain

Start an out break yet our doesn’t

Flow any more

 That words never spoken

Amy more

Yet me and you

Still remain!

Reviews

[Sarah J. Kelleher]

This is wonderful... The passing stories between people. Some stories bring pain and sadness, while others make us so happy that we feel like we can fly. All stories, it seems, bring us nostalgia in some shape or form. It's really very unique, the way we as humans can do this. I love this, it makes perfect sense.

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

wondrous stream of consciousness writing~ some of the most engaging and thought provoking poetics come not from organized thoughts with an agenda but from giving oneself completely over to the language of the subconscious~ as is proven here~ wonderful free form~

[Tate Morgan]

very nice

[IComeAnon]

Beautiful flow throughout the poem. It reads beautifully.

[Magdelena]

This was fab! Intense is what came to mind as your words came at me..
Loved it!

Mags xx

[Short.Nerd]

Good job (: