Lingers

As I drown myself

In fiction books

Trying to realse my mind

From thoughts

Of the one who

Lingers......

In my dreams

Author's Note

Tell me what you think

Reviews

[Sarah J. Kelleher]

This sounds so much like me it's not even funny! O.O I read to escape the real world, especially to avert my thoughts in that way. It says so much in just that little bit. Two things I'd like to point out: One, I wouldn't start this out with the word "as" because when you read this like a sentence it sounds off with "as" as your starting word. Two, you have a spelling error in the third line. The correct spelling of the word realse is "release". Nice work!

[Magdelena]

I think it's marvelous.. Your words describe so many that all of us can relate.. Amazing piece of work with imagery that jumps right out at you in so few a line.. Bravo!

Mags xx

[Coyote Poetry]

You are amazing. A complete poem in so few words. Escape into books relieve the pain for a moment. Mind and heart revive sweet memories. A excellent poem.
Coyote