Peace in you

A big storm hit oklahoma last night

Storms cloud are in the sky

I might be worried over the storm

Some how my thoughts

Drift to you

Days Go on by

 My thoughts linger over to you

I look for out of

The corner of my eye

 

My brain says no

My Heart says yes

How did I fall for you?

I dont think your cute

 

So what is this

The storms are blazing

My thoughts

Are dreaming of you

In this stormy night

I feel peace in you

Reviews

[Katie L]

well written.

[zombiikillah666]

yea..........i know right..........ugh......we always fall for the jerks.'
or , maybe thats just me. darn.
well, i like this. really good.
good use of words and stuff...
you know, all that jazz. (:

[Coyote Poetry]

When we are content and feel safe. We can feel peace in our life with the special person. I like the positive and hopeful feel of the poem. You said it all in so few words. A outstanding poem.
Coyote