The words you said

The words you said to me

The day you left

Have never left my brain

I am slowly trying to

Not to die

Living a day to day

I knew it that one day you would reject me

You were too perfect

For me

Because I am just merely human

And your beautiful immortal

Vampire

So I knew that what you

Said was true.

Author's Note

Inspired by: Twilight

Reviews

[Chickee]

I like it but it seams like iit was inspired by new moon. I like it and you have the potential to come up with your own ideas rather than makeing good ideas better.

[Katie L]

i like it, keep writing

[deeps]

This is wonderful I like this

[Coyote Poetry]

Poem was beautiful. The feel of sadness is strong in your words. Description was very good. No real Vampires in this world. Only people who waste love and run. A outstanding poem.
Coyote